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Miracle Medical Mystery by ~BrightsideKiller:iconBrightsideKiller:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


Every night he takes you apart bone by bone,
      muscle by muscle,
      organ by organ;
he always promises to put you back together when he’s done,
but everyone can tell that you’re still,
      so,
      shattered.

He has his own method, his own style, his own flaws
  No one knows how to fix him, either
    Doctors are baffled at the boy who stands in front of them;
      Medical mystery, medical marvel, medical disaster?
        They can’t seem to find the right word for what he is anymore.

Maybe he’s taking his pain out on you, maybe he wishes he could figure out
Why he can take you apart and put you back together like it never happened,
And wonders why he can’t diagnose himself, putting it all back into place.

      His bones are on the floor,
      His muscle hangs from
      every corner of his room
      And his organs are strewn
      over his bed like dirty clothes

But his heart still beats, and it still skips, and it still loves.
It loves to see the way you work, the way you breath,
And the loves the way it sees you living, for him

      Only for him, only for you.
      He’s only here for one reason,
      “Its always going to be you.
      I don’t want to remember anyone else.”
©2009 ~BrightsideKiller
:iconbrightsidekiller:

Author's Comments

I was in the hospital all day yesterday. I wanted to try and do something with that, but ended up with this instead. I'm actually pretty pleased with it, its really different (at least I think) but its a good change, ashley is pleased.

I think I've used the last line in a different peice, but I really can't remember, and I really don't mind it. Everything is always connected in my head.

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Mood: Optimism =hajike-no-tori Mar 12, 2009, 9:53:26 PM
It strikes me as a methodical, yet ultimately warm-blooded (ha) romance. Maybe I'd think of something more clever to say if it weren't 2 in the morning but this really rocks. :clap:

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I KISSED A MUDKIP AND I LIEKED IT!

Proud to be SHA GOJYO of ~rp-ikkou; accept no substitutes! I write TL;DR poetry and the occasional story. My drawing ability...needs work.
:iconbrightsidekiller:
~BrightsideKiller Mar 13, 2009, 3:43:02 AM
Lol Thanks.

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I need you to keep it together, so I can fall a p a r t.
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~lovestruck-x Mar 14, 2009, 6:04:32 PM
:hug:
i am not lying when i say:
this is amazing in every way possible.
:iconbrightsidekiller:
~BrightsideKiller Mar 14, 2009, 6:36:12 PM
Thank You :heart:

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I need you to keep it together, so I can fall a p a r t.
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~the-chemical-factory Mar 19, 2009, 10:08:00 AM
this is amazing.
i can't even pick a part that i like best.
it's all beautiful. :heart:

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you were the fire in my eyes,
but i wanted to put you out.
:iconbrightsidekiller:
~BrightsideKiller Mar 19, 2009, 10:08:59 AM
Thank You :hug::heart:

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I need you to keep it together, so I can fall a p a r t.
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